New Story

February 21, 2013 at 11:22 pm (Inklings from Hisimagenme) (, , , , , , )


A while ago this fairytale-like story came flying out of my pen. I adore fantasy fiction like that of Jeffery Overstreet and Ted Dekker. Tolkien and C. S. Lewis who were inspired by George MacDonald who has been called the King of Fantasy. I know not, but that these writers have done much to “stoke” my mythic and poetic nature.

The story comes out and is written as it does. I so far can not look any farther than the next sentence, sometimes next word. My gift has never flourished in the futuristic planning that seems to be gifted to so many others. The plot thickens and characters develop in accordance with the moment I write. It has long been a frustration to me I admit. God dips my pen in the ink and points it out as it goes, rather than giving me a “rough-sketch” and allowing me to see a bit of the whole picture; with which I begin to color-in. I must trust His timing and ways…and put the gift He gives in proper lead.

So I will begin in simple little installments and see where it goes. As I love pictures to “add their own words” I will attempt to find those that do the picture in my head justice, no promises though! 🙂
I have no title or at least none has been given to enchant my fancy. So without further a-do. Here goes.


Once upon a time in the heart of Irlivadad. Once upon a sight unseen. Deciduous colors sparkled and tingled upon the quiet boy-lad King. His thoughts drew forth in the wind of contrition; hearkening back black-froth clouds bent to rain down sedition. Up, up they whirled and the black-cloud unfurled.
The blackness was assimilated, now a thunder-clap of rainbows; and the rain, as it fell, bled into the earth now to dwell.
Emerald and garnet grew up leaf and vine. Collaborating with violet and saffire melding rock and stone for the boy-king a throne. The vaguest of a whisper from His lips drew a snow flaked in crystal. Blizzard and bluster, a chaos of color settled down on Him a crown and robe in illuminous reflecting light. He sat upon the throne and raised His face towards the up-everlasting sky, and sighed.

The air wavered and crackled, static electric. His gaze wondered to the far horizon catching the eve of the symphony of Frakenlands colorful birth. The crystalline rainbows were chasing away the last of the black-cloud over the Mesapeak Mountains. The Circle of Fire was on the descent; casting more flavors of color and hue on the babe-land taking its first breath of colorful life. The King-lad opened His mouth, smiled and sang. The air vibrated and hummed, giving birth to each color in song. Emerald whistled and sighed around stalks, leaves, blades and stems. Crystalline twangs flowed through the liquid essence that quenched every thirst in Frakenland and beyond. An academy of sound riding the waves of birth-pangs in riotous color. Animals found a new release in expression that drew forth like a burst of innocent delight. Men, women and children joined in Frakenlands first song, harmonious and captivating. The air filled up with intoxicating hallowing worship. Frakenland had found its voice.
The King-lad leaned back in the throne, wilting like flower on stem after a deluge. Breath labored with each intake and exhale; the charged particles of sound and pigment seemed to inflate and deflate as if dependant on His lungs to survive.
“Done.”, said the King-lad, “At least for today, I am well contented. It is well done.”


Next installment next week :-).

Grace and peace in Yeshua the Messiah ❤

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